This entry was posted on February 2, 2011 by Squonkhunter. It was filed under Uncategorized .
What exactly is the joke here? The last panel kind of falls flat, and the second-to-last isn’t strong enough to support the whole comic.
Also, I think an exclamation mark or a comma would be more appropriate than a semicolon in the 4th (5th?) panel. I mean, she’s clearly yelling, but the period/semicolon combo is kind of stiff, don’t you think?
February 13, 2011 at 7:15 am
A good idea. I’ll change the semicolon.
This was back when I was writing the comics as one page punchlines, but I’ve changed my format, and am a bit embarrassed by these earlier entries. You pose a valid point, though. 😉
July 15, 2011 at 5:05 pm
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